1、I took a cab to Lily’s place. (改写：我乘出租车去了百合花的家。)
2、We sat in Lily’s sunny room while I sketched the current situation in detail. (改写：我们坐在百合花的日光房里，我详细地勾勒出了目前的情况。)
3、Commenting on this would be unnecessary. (改写：对此发表评论没有必要。)
4、Lily resides in a luxurious penthouse near Park Avenue. (改写：百合花居住在公园大道附近的一个豪华顶层公寓里。)
5、While attempting to enhance what is essentially a romantic comedy, the director falls slightly below his best level. (改写：尽管试图增强这部本质上的浪漫喜剧，但导演的表现略显不足。)
